persuasive writing

Today in writing we revisited o.r.e.o writing. I tried to get someone to agree with me on the same subject. What really helped me was the game. The subject was should we have animals as pets yes or no? We split up in groups on what we agreed on and we had to give reasons. The hard part was coming up with reasons on my own.  The easy part was helping to come up with some of the reasons in a group. My next step is to give examples to back up my reasons.         

narrative writing

Last weeks I have been learning how to write a narrative piece of writing the easy part was coming up with creative words to use in my story. The hard part was trying to find where those words would fit in and if they where the right meaning that i nead.

                                                 The homeless man and a dog

What's that stench it smells like dog sleeping next to my bed I’ve made from old cardboard that I found in a dumpster. There it is. It might be homeless like me? I let it stay for the night next to my box.In the morning I wake up itchy, feeling not normal. l think i'm a dog.

People want to take me I ran I suddenly wondered into an ally leading right to an arena in the middle of the night. Surround with competitive gamblers I am terrified still wondering what happened last night ever since that dog came Things have been different. First I get chased and now i'm in an arena where to hide. A group of guys look at me with a funny grin. They pick me up by the neck and rag doll me into a ring. With another dog. He snarls at me, he runs me with high speed, he sinks his teeth into my back. Boom! He bowls me into a wall and he quickly bites my leg. I can't take it anymore pow! I can hear the police kick the door I slowly start to faint from all the blood loss. I wake up at the vet on a

surgery table I overheard the nurses saying they are going to amputate my leg. Boom a needle knocks me out cold. I slowly feel the anesthetic working its way down my body.
It's over I opened my eyes I get lifted into a transportation truck taking me to dog disability foster home. The truck doors open I wanted to run but i noticed my leg was missing. I read the title on the building I was told I needed to get some rest to get up to my full recovery. Two weeks later I went to my normal form as a human then he was told to move out of his area that he was staying. He finally got a job and saved up enough money to by a dog but what he did not know what dog to by. Bark bark he heard then I knew who to buy I zoomed! Right into the foster home he may have had three legs but he was perfect. Then we walked into the sun set and lived happily ever after.

   

Watangi trip

This week i have been learning my class Nga Rau Rangatira. went for a trip to watangi to learn about technology. We also learnt about close encounters. learning about close encounters was a great thing to learn about we learnt about Kupe and able Tasman. We learnt that captain cook had traveled all over NZ and named all the islands but didn't get close enough to get any more information. We had a tutu on the vr and went on a few apps that helped with what we were going to put on the vr. Some of the apps paint 3d,sculpt gl. tinker i learnt the most helpful one was paint 3 d. because there is more to do and it looks more creative.